Saturday, June 2, 2007
MLA
Such were the professors’ words; rather let me say such were the words of the devil that fate enounced to destroy me. As he went on I felt as if my soul were grappling with a palpable enemy. One by one, the various keys were touched which formed the mechanism of my being. Chord after chord was sounded, and soon my mind was filled with one thought, one conception, one purpose. “So much has been done” exclaimed the soul of Frankenstein, “more, far more will I achieve treading in the steps already marked.” I will pioneer a new way, explore unknown powers, and unfold to the world the deepest, mysteries of creation.
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This is pretty well done. There are a couple issues with commas:
rather, let me say,
As he went on,
Look out for those modifiers that are extra, that interrupt the flow of Noun-verb-noun but do not restrict the possible meanings of the nouns or verbs they modify. These are usually set off by commas.
There are some other options with quotes at the end, although what you've done is quite correct. You might have considered the last sentence as part of the quote as well.
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