Ok Bc, tell me what you think.
I am practically industrious, painstaking, a workman, to execute with perseverance and labour, but besides this there is a love for the marvellous. A belief in the marvellous, intertwined in all my projects, which hurries me out of the common pathways of men, even to the wild sea, and unvisited regions I am about to explore.
In the majestic and wondrous scenes which surrounded our swiss home, the sublime shapes of the mountains, the changes of the seasons tempest and calm, the silence of winter and the life and turbulence of our alpine summers, she found ample scope for admiration and delight.
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a workman, to execute with perseverance and labour,
The above doesn't need the comma after workman because the phrase you set off restricts the possible references of workman.
but besides this there is a love for the marvellous. A belief in the marvellous,
The period after marvelous doens't work because what follows is a fragment. A colon [:] would work.
season's
Otherwise you just need the apostrophe ['] in seasons, as above.
Good work with at tough paragraph. That involved Gothic syntax that Mary Shelley gives Victor Frankenstein sometimes throws people, but you've followed well.
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