During the Vietnam War, some of the many men, and women faced emotional, mental, and or physical concerns. The movie, Apocalypse Now (directed by Francis Ford Coppola) portrays a sense of lunacy in certain of the scenes, and characters throughout the film. The main character, Willard, (Martin Sheen)), and the boat crew members, Chef, Chief, Lance, and Clean, help guild Willard up the river to complete his classified mission. In search of Colonel Kurtz, a former Green Beret, Willard; Chief; Chef; and Lance are always alert, as they travel through the Vietnamese jungle up the Nung River to let Willard complete his mission, execute Kurtz.
Saturday, May 5, 2007
Punctuating Interjections and Lists
Melroes0914 has kindly contributed a paragraph that has some hard-to-punctuate lists and interjections. I have edited it a little so the class can re-solve some of the issues. Everyone should have a look at this for next week:
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I hope this paragraph has been helpful. I wasn't sure if I wanted to post the paragraph, but I figured it would be helpful to me and to the class.Now I know the mistakes I have made; although It will take me awhile to retrain my thinking when it comes to my grammar skills... I just have to practice,practice,practice!
During the Vietnam War, some of the many men and women faced emotional, mental, and/or physical concerns. The movie "Apocalypse Now" (directed by Francis Ford Coppola), portrays a sense of lunacy in certain of the scenes and characters throughout the film. The main character, Willard (Martin Sheen), and the boat crew members Chef, Chief, Lance, and Clean help guild Willard up the river to complete his classified mission. In search of Colonel Kurtz, a former Green Beret, Willard, Chief, Chef, and Lance are always alert as they travel through the Vietnamese jungle, up the Nung River, to let Willard complete his mission, execute Kurtz.
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